L.G.
VOCABULARY: INTERESTING WORDS
S.O.S
I know what a noun is
I can describe nouns
with an adjective
I know what precise
detail is and can use it
I can use adjectives
when adding precise detail
I can use a ‘list of three’ when listing adjectives
The Tigeroo
Rrooaarr this magnetic animal is the
fierce animal living in South Africa.
My animal
has black, red, yellow, orange and brown on its body.
It’s about
120 m high that is crazy!
Wait a
second I bet you are wondering how it feels and what it eats. Well it is kind,
caring, loving, sharing, happy and jumping animal. What does it eat?
Well it eats
anything that is meat, grass, people, fish and Zebras Zebras are there
favourite food.
So watch out
when you go to Africa because it will be watching you...
From Rinoa
Hawkins
Hello Rinoa
ReplyDeleteI liked the way how you put detail into your writing and told us where it lives and high it was.
I liked the way you put magnetic into your hookin and what it eats.
Next time you could tell us why it loves eating Zebras and whys its is their favourite food.
From Leand
hi rinoa i like the way you have said waching you and wach out and hock in next time you should. could tell us more about your story. next time you could tell us why it loves eats zeabras and its favourite food from allix
ReplyDeletehi Rinoa
ReplyDeleteI like the way you descried the tigeroo
for exaple it eats any meat,grass,people,fish and Zebra
I like the way you were putting puntion in it
for exaple So watch out when you go to Africa because it will be watching you
next time you can use your L.G.s