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ORGANISING MY IDEAS
S.O.S
I can group ideas that
are the same together
I can follow the burger
model
I can use paragraphs
The Tiglaer Story
This
pacific creature has 4 eagle legs, 4 wings, a tiger body and tiger head do you
know what it is well it is a Tiglaer.
The
Tiglaer can attack anything any in its path.
It
is really scary and that's how I got my scar.
The
Tiglaer can only be found under ground the area of Stratford, more specify it
enjoys Stratford Primary School the best.
This
animal eats a special food which is gold.
The
Tiglaer is 10 feet tall it has 4 Eagle wings and 4 feet and it has black eyes.
It
really creepy and if any person would go near the Tiglaer will get killed.
This Tiglaer can
fly because of its 4 wings so not only do you have to watch underneath you, you
also have to watch above you too.
By Tayler
l like the way you talked about the anamail and you descrabed it perfect
ReplyDeletenext time try to perciss words
from you class room mate hayley
HI TAYLER I LIKE THE YOU HAVE DONE IT HAS 4 LEGS AND THIS ANIMAL HAS .SPECIAL FOODMABAY YOU COUD TALK MORE ABOUT YOUR STORY AND I LIKE THE WAY YOU SAID DESCRABED IT. PERFECT
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