L.G.
To use emotive or factual language
to inform and entertain an audience.
S.O.S.
- One reason (why you
think this)
- Detail (to back up your
reason)
- Use Emotive words (such as careless, disgusted, must, have to) when talking to the audience.
Uniforms
UNIFORMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So i am here to talk to you about uniforms. Hi my name is Charlize and I am convincing you to wear uniforms at sps.
Firstly uniforms are not bad!!! Uniforms are something that tells other people what school you come from. Other people will see that you are wearing a SPS uniform and say “I see you are from Stratford Primary School”. People won’t need to ask what school you are from, because they will see.
Secondly has someone ever came up to you and said what school do you come from well someone said it to me once. Who has ever worn a uniform before well I have. I loved it! I was able to represent the school when I wasn’t there. I also found Mum wasn’t spending all her money on clothes!!!
I liked wearing a uniform and I think you will too!!!!
I liked wearing a uniform and I think you will too!!!!
Lastly if we have uniform at sps they are really comfortable when you get use to it. I would know, as I have worn one before.
You will forget that you never wore an uniform.
You will forget that you never wore an uniform.
I hope I have convince you to where uniforms at sps oh and just remember uniforms are not bad.
By Charlize
Hi,Charlize.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you started with capital letters in an enresting way.
Example UNIFORMS!!!!!
I like the way you said and just remember uniforms are not bad.
From Aysha.