L.G. To write our stories using proper sentences.
S.O.S
Capital letter
One idea
Add detail to the idea
Full stop
Check - sentences makes sense
Check - Have I used my personal learning
goal?
Personal L.G. To add detail to my ideas.
S.O.S
Write one idea.
Add detail that explains the idea more.
How Tsunami's work.
Tsunami's waves are very strong. A start of a tsunami is a earthquake in sea floor and sea floor snaps up. Once a tsunami begins it destroys houses and kills people, and moves slowly.
I explained about a tsunami, how it works and that tsunami's are strong.
By Leand
Hi Leand
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have used descriptive language in your story like 'the sea floor snaps up'.
I like the way that you have said that Tsunami waves are very strong.
Next time you could add more detail.
From Rinoa
Hi Leand
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have used descriptive language in your story.
I like that you have explained how a Tsunami works
Next time you could write more about the tsunami.
From Aysha