Tim's Lemon

Learning Goal: To explode a moment.

S.O.S.* hook in your audience * What were you thinking? *How did you feel? *What did you do (Strong action verbs) * What did you say? * SHow not tell

Lemon

Have you ever sucked a  lemon? It hurts. It tastes so sour. It makes my jaw lock. If you  don't take my advice and suck a lemon be warned you will end up like this:O  It just phenomenally hurts . The juice will  hurt. I went like:O as Jaxon said “tocher”amaru said  “a nightmare come true”  and Sophia said “best day EVER” . My head said  “sour sour sour sour sour”. I thought ow ow ow ow ow it hurts it hurts help me.
By Tim