Monday, April 10, 2017

Amaru's Lemon story

Learning Goal: To explode a moment.

S.O.S.* hook in your audience * What were you thinking? *How did you feel? *What did you do (Strong action verbs) * What did you say? * Show not tell

Lemon story
Has your taste buds ever felt so sour? My taste buds were lingering before the lemon even entered my mouth my taste buds were scared! I thought it was horrible but after a few chomps it was good. I saw people making faces and crying from the sour.
By Amaru

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