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The
Starfin
The
Stafin looks like a whale but swims like a starfish. They eat fish, they swim
very very fast and they live in New Zealand.
The Starfin is eight feet long and 2.5 metres wide. They have different patterns
each time and they live the sea.
The
Starfin has no hair and it is
This
animal is interesting, next time you are swimming keep your eye out for it.
By
Alix
Hello Alix
ReplyDeleteI like the way you told us how long the starfin is and how many metres wide the starfin is.
I like the way you told us it has different patterns and it has no hair and it was interesting
Next time you could tell us where in NewZealand does the starfin live
From Leand