L.G.
To use emotive or factual language
to inform and entertain an audience.
S.O.S.
- One reason (why you
think this)
- Detail (to back up your
reason)
- Use Emotive words (such as careless, disgusted, must,
have to) when talking to the audience.
MOOOOOOO
MOOOOOO MOOOOOO, come on Emily you are doing soo well!!
Hi I am
Jenna and I am going to convince you to have a pet day at SPS. Now Emily you ask, she is my pet cow. Pet day is when you train your pet, spend
time with your pet and show your pet to your friends.
Before pet
day at school you need to train your pet.
The pets you can bring are puppies, dogs, cats, kittens, cows, calves,
sheep, lambs and a lot more. PET Day is
AMAZING!!!
Did you
know…. I trained my calf to be quiet when I said shhhhhhhhh. I wish my sister learnt to be quiet when I
said Shhhh.
So you need
to train your pet.
Secondly pet
day makes you spend time with your pet.
Because you need to spend time with your pet to train and understand
your pet.
You know
that we are always talking about our pets to the cat and in sharing time well
now you show the class. You would be
able to bring your pets to school on pet day and show your friends. How cool would that be….
So pet day
will be the best day at school ever!!!!!!!!
I hope you
believe that tooo and think we should have pet day at SPS
By Jenna
l loved the way you said mooooooooooooooo! that was very cool.
ReplyDeletenext time you can descabe more about what is your anamail like what can it do.
Hello Jenna
ReplyDeleteI like the way you told us about pet day
for example you train your pets and show them to your friends
I like the way you trained your pet calf to be quiet
foe example when you said shhhhh your pet calf became quiet
Next time you could tell us when the pet day is here
From leand