L.G. SENTENCE
STRUCTURE: MAKE SURE MY SENTENCES MAKE SENSE
S.O.S
Re-read my work to
myself
Does it sound right to
me?
Does it sound right to
my buddy?
I can write sentences of
different lengths
I can write different types of sentences - simple, compound, complex
MY LIOTURS
Do you want
know about the Lioturs? They are found on land and sea,
they have an amazing feature on their back and love raw fish. This feature
protects them from predators.
You can find the lioturs in Canada’s oceans and forests they are not rare to find, you can also find
them in Australia too.
The lioturs
looks like a lion with a turtle backpack but the turtle shell is actually
attached to his back and he has a long mane.
They have sharp claws like a knife.
The lioturs
loves eating leafs, salads, raw fish and birds
That’s why I
think this animal is the best.
By Michael
Hi Michael
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have used ejictives in your writing.
I like the way you have uused nouns in your writing for example lioturs.
Next tiime you can use more ddetail about the lioturs.
l liked the way you said its the best anamal
ReplyDeletenext time try not make the story perfect
from hayley
hi my name is mlg kyle
ReplyDeletei like your punctuation,retoracall qusten
and i like your amazing words
next time put even more amazing words
(ps)your good at writing;-)