L.G. To write our stories using proper sentences.
S.O.S
Capital letter
One idea
Add detail to the idea
Full stop
Check - sentences makes sense
Check - Have I used my personal learning
goal?
Personal L.G. To add detail to my ideas.
S.O.S
Write one idea.
Add detail that explains the idea more.
A tsunami is formed by a sea earthquake or a sea volcano. Tsunamis gets stronger as it grows. It creates shock waves in the water the shock waves spread like an army.The tsunami can grow 100ft tall and in meters it is 30.48.That means that tsunami forms bigger waves in the sea . When it reaches land it spreads as it destroys houses shops and kills heaps of people. Glass smashes like rain in the air and the glass breaks cars.
By Payton Scott.
to payton
ReplyDeletei like the way told me how it is formed
i like the way you how tall it is
next time add more detail
from lara
to payton scott
ReplyDeletewow l like the way you explamed how a tsunami forms
Wow:)
ReplyDeleteI like the way you told the audience how a Tsunami forms
I like the way you said the glass smashes like rain
Next time you could add more detail
Aysha:)