Tim's report on Great White Sharks

Great white sharks

H.I Sharks hunt in packs of any

number. Sharks live in the pacific ocean.

The Pacific Ocean is around Japan Usa Australia New zealand.Sharks swim around the Pacific Ocean scrambling for food. Great White Sharks have bellies as white as pus.

The Great White Sharks dorsal colors depend what angle you see it in and lighting. So if you see the bottom of it in a very bright light you will probably see a very white belly.

Great White Shark's normally eat alone but one eating great white shark might attract others. E.g if  great white shark just killed a whale then it will start eating the Whale. Then their is a very slim chance that that Great White Shark might attract others. Great White Sharks eat Crabs, Whales, Fish, Stingrays and much MUCH more.

Scientist say that we pose more of a threat to great white sharks than they pose to us.

By Tim  

Have you seen this animal before?

 Tie horse

find them in boys but it is really really rear.

The Tie Horse can live anywhere. It is really good at hiding. It mostly hides in bushes and trees. The Tie Horse has gold and black stripes all over their body. The Main matches the coat pattern however it is just a different color it is dark and light brown striped . It has a soft pink nose.

The Tie Horse only eats pizza and lollies. It is the leader of Tigers and Horses. So it always is leading the herd or group around . It seems like they would fight but with the Tie Horse around they would not dear.

The Tie Horse is the tallest animal ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

By Kira

Have you seen this animal before?

Monkey Cow

The monkey cow is half monkey and half cow. It can  stay in the cold for 20 minutes.

Monkey cow lives in the North Island in Taranaki because it has lots of green grass.

It eats banana and it sit on their play house and tree. The yellow part of the banana keeps the Monkey cow healthy. The Monkey Cow loves to play in the grass because the grass is soft on its feet.

The Monkey Cow is black, purple, yellow and brown.  It also has green, bright blue and dark blue on its body. It has horns on its head and big ears like a mouse. It has black stripes on its tummy with a purple circle in the middle of its tummy.

It can dance and jump really high. As high as a paper plane flying.

By Tait

Our Last week Assembly Item

We have been working on report writing and learning about different places in New Zealand. 

Have a look. 

Tim's Lemon

Learning Goal: To explode a moment.

S.O.S.* hook in your audience * What were you thinking? *How did you feel? *What did you do (Strong action verbs) * What did you say? * SHow not tell

Lemon

Have you ever sucked a  lemon? It hurts. It tastes so sour. It makes my jaw lock. If you  don't take my advice and suck a lemon be warned you will end up like this:O  It just phenomenally hurts . The juice will  hurt. I went like:O as Jaxon said “tocher”amaru said  “a nightmare come true”  and Sophia said “best day EVER” . My head said  “sour sour sour sour sour”. I thought ow ow ow ow ow it hurts it hurts help me.
By Tim

Amaru's Lemon story

Learning Goal: To explode a moment.

S.O.S.* hook in your audience * What were you thinking? *How did you feel? *What did you do (Strong action verbs) * What did you say? * Show not tell

Lemon story

Has your taste buds ever felt so sour? My taste buds were lingering before the lemon even entered my mouth my taste buds were scared! I thought it was horrible but after a few chomps it was good. I saw people making faces and crying from the sour.

By Amaru

Vincent's Lion story

Learning goal: To describe what you are without using the word.

S.O.S. FS/CL (place names, names)
Punctuation ? ,
Precise words
Date

Show not tell

I am a vicious  animal as I stalk my prey.my heart is pounding as I run towards the zebra. I leap as I try to catch the Zebra.

By Vincent