Monday, March 6, 2017

Sophia's Show not tell

Show not tell 

I was happy: I was as happy as a dog getting a bone. 

I was sad: I was as sad as a kid losing their parents. 

I was tired: My yawn was as loud as a lion roaring. 

I was scared: My heart was pounding like a mouse surrounded by a big lion trying to eat it. 

By Sophia 

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