The running man challenge
I was really scared when I started to dance. My own heart was pounding so so fast and… then crash into the table.
I heard a loud noise in the classroom.
My brain was thinking what was I doing in
the running man challenge.
I was in the running man challenge.
By Camryn
I like the way you have used detail in your story.
ReplyDeleteI like the middle bit, where it says crash into the table.
N.S you could use a bit more detail in the start bit for example why were you scared.
From mckenna.